“I liked reading at the time but when reading started to become associated with school work that I feel was when I lost intrest in it and became a chore for me. “- Run on sentence from my first draft of my literacy narrative. 

“What I do remember about it though was how happy I was that I could read all the way through the book and that I read that book to everyone my family, my friends, and even my dog. ” Run on sentence in my final draft of my literacy narrative.