Looking at the peer review comments and reading my essay I have come to recognize some global error in my work. One of the main global error I plan to work on and try to fix is the flow of my essay. In the review comments and simply just rereading my paper there are many ideas and focal points of the paper that do not transition well from one to the other. I plan to fix this by adding transitions between the paragraphs that need them using pointing words or key words to try and make connections. Working on my conclusion is another is another global revision I plan to work on and improve. To make my conclusion stronger I plan to reiterate the points in my paper that I want the reader to take from the essay. I want to make it clear for the reader what my essential points of my paper are to make it into the Discourse.